19C - Script

 Draft Script


Feedback Sheets 



With the feedback I got I changed my script by balancing my action lines and dialogue, and I also changed the ending to make it more satisfying.

Final Script

Comments

  1. Freddie17 January 2022 at 03:53

    For my resubmission of this assignment, I changed the mistakes I had made with the dialogue and I added a bit more punctuation.

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